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Saturday, September 11, 2010

Morning Glory

 

It was a great dawn
A new day was born
The sun started peeping out
Really big and stout
With out any warning
Comes out the morning
Everyone knows it's dawn
They wake up with a yawn
Someone has lied
It's cold outside
The sun gives us light
It's very very bright
The day's full of excitement
Don't make it too tight

3 comments:

  1. really nice! if you could replace 'Really big and stout' and ' the sun gives us light'with better lines (for they are commonplace) it would be still better! my wishes!

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